SEVENTEEN AND TRAUMATIC BRAIN INJURY

Written by William E. Spear
For The Three Fifty-seven

The four episodes of SEVENTEEN in March 2024 concludes the story of Severin Vincent Tennyson aka Tenny which started in 2023

Hello. This is The Three Fifty-seven and my name is William Spear.

Today’s article, SEVENTEEN AND TRAUMATIC BRAIN INJURY, is a preview of the series Seventeen which continues and concludes in March. It is also background on the series and the circumstance, a friend’s Traumatic Brain Injury (TBI), that inspired it.

The series SEVENTEEN premiered in March of 2023. With a tagline of “He’s dying to forget. She lives to remember.”, the four episodes introduced Severin Vincent Tennyson, a non-verbal and cane-using janitor at Gunderson High School in central New Jersey. Nicknamed Tenny, the cause of his non-verbal status and usage of a cane is not revealed in the first four episodes.

The first episode began with Tenny sweeping the basketball floor in the auditorium and newly hired Superintendent Mills di Stefano enters. He does not recognize her but a memory from decades earlier is re-awakened. To the surprise of everyone, he runs out screaming “Seventeen!” The four episodes in March of 2024 continue immediately after Tenny’s energetic display and will bring the series to an end.

The inspiration for the series was a friend impacted by Traumatic Brain Injury (TBI). While leaning in with famiy and others to support the recovery, the power and frailty of the brain became apparent. On one level, the human brain is a powerful organ capable of composing symphonies, performing mathematical calculations, or writing a story.

On another level, it is tremendously fragile. A single wrong knock or bump and it could be like a pinball machine going TILT.

During the recovery, I promised to write a story. It was started several times and progress was shared. After more than five years, the central character, Severin Vincent Tennyson aka Tenny, presented himself. Of humorous note, TBI is the only common characteristic between Tenny and my friend.

After two more years and in March of 2023, the first four episodes of SEVENTEEN were released. A year after that and throughout March of 2024, the last four episodes of SEVENTEEN will be completed and released. Until then, the following is a modest excerpt of what lies ahead:

Excerpt of SEVENTEEN, Episode Five - The Clenched Fist

Two floors into the basement at Gunderson High School in central New Jersey, Severin Vincent Tennyson, nicknamed Tenny, slammed his head into a locker. Over and over.

His shirt was covered with blood.

No matter how hard he hit his head against the locker, he could no longer forget. People, places, and memories came screaming back. He slammed one more time and let loose an terrified “NOOOO!”

From behind him a voice spoke: “Tenny.”

He did not want this to happen. He knew the voice was inside his head and did not look. It spoke again: “Tenny.”

When the hand touched his shoulder, he screamed and spun around.

The next episode of SEVENTEEN is scheduled for Tuesday 5 March with subsequent releases for each Tuesday of the month. Full transcript and audio be here. Podcasts only will be available through most streaming services.

For fullest background, the previous four episodes may be found here:

SEVENTEEN, Episode One – Tenny

SEVENTEEN, Episode Two – Who Said That?

SEVENTEEN, Episode Three – Forget

SEVENTEEN, Episode Four – Champions

SEVENTEEN was written and narrated by William Spear. It is produced by The Three Fifty-seven.

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THE MESSENGER – ROMANCE 20 MINUTES INTO THE FUTURE, Episode 01

Written and Narrated by William E. Spear

Produced by The Three Fifty-seven

17 February 2024

The Messenger in ROMANCE 20 MINUTES INTO THE FUTURE, Episode 01

(Footsteps approach and go under)

Hello. I’m The Messenger. Imagine a “fixer” or an “auditor” but more intelligent. When I make a visit, an encounter-of-the-cerebral-kind is forthcoming.

A while back I came out of retirement and rescued Jim and Francine’s Place, a diner started in the early 1950’s, from an ill-advised grandkid.

My old Boss called me again for another job and started yapping about an assistant.

I said I don’t need an assistant and my old Boss corrected me: “You aren’t ‘getting’ an assistant.”

“That’s more like it. What’s the job?”

The Boss looked around, leaned across a desk bigger than most cars, and said: “You are ‘becoming’ an assistant.”

(Theme for Romance 20 Minutes Into The Future comes up and goes under)

Hello my name is William Spear and this is our new series titled ROMANCE 20 MINUTES INTO THE FUTURE.

We welcome back The Messenger from retirement in Spring Lake, New Jersey to take on a new case.

It’s The Messenger in Episode One titled No, No, No, No! A Thousand Times, A Million Times, A Bazillion Times No.

I stared at my Boss and growled: “What do you mean I’m ‘becoming’ an assistant?”

“Just what I said,” was the response. “You’re new job is to be an assistant. And you have a staff.”

“Not happening.”

“You’ve always wanted a staff.”

“Doesn’t matter.”

“Lots of perks.”

“No.”

“It’s all office work.”

“No!”

“You don’t have to drive.”

“No! No! No! A thousand times, a million times, a bazillion times NO!”

“It’s twice your normal rate.”

“Tell me more.”

“The client is Global United Conglomerate. Makes everything from kitchen cabinets to seaweed ice cream. They have a massive project that has stalled just before launch.”

I was suspicious about “twice my normal rate” and asked, “Why are you paying me double?”

“It’s one of our most prestigious clients and you are our best Messenger. And . . .” The Boss whispered, “You and your staff are working for two people.”

I refused and started for the door. “Okay, okay,” said The Boss. “Quadruple pay.”

I could add a hot tub to my place in Spring Lake on quadruple pay. I could add a hot tub for every day of the week on quadruple pay. Without turning around I asked who was I working for.

The Boss riffed through pages and read: “The company believes the stalled project is being sabotaged by one of two people. Jason Lines – A successful, hard-working introverted designer who fears human contact. Or, Laura Flow – A brilliant and driven operations executive whose best friends are spreadsheets.”

I agreed to quadruple pay and turned around to seal the deal when a massive bolt of electricity struck me between the eyes.

I woke up behind a huge window looking around the boss’ office. I didn’t feel anything. No hot, no cold, and no smells either. Out of nowhere a giant-sized version of the Boss sat down in front of the window.

“How’d you get to be so big?” I asked.

The Boss laughed and told me I had it backwards. I had been digitized and was inside of a computer.

I looked around and saw the wires, connectors, and microchips of a computer. I wasn’t a human anymore. I was a program!

I tried to shake a fist but didn’t have one. The Boss laughed some more. I screamed through the computer.

(Theme for Romance 20 Minutes Into The Future comes up and goes under)

You have just listened to Episode One of Romance 20 Minutes Into The Future.

Music is through the courtesy of LESFM.

The Three Fifty-seven is written and produced by William Spear.

Thank you for listening and come back again when The Messenger yells, “If you don’t get me out of here I will infect every electronic device you own. Cell phones, microwave ovens, gaming systems, everything. . . . Wait. Wait! WAIT! What are you doing? Don’t you dare turn me off. Don’t you-“

(Theme for Romance 20 Minutes Into The Future comes up and fades out)

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The Month Ahead for February 2024

William E. Spear (or is it an AI-generated image? . . . It must be him; AI is better than that.)

A regular accounting of The Three Fifty-seven published on the first Monday of each month.

This is The Month Ahead for February 2024

Hello, All,

January was allegedly a Season Break. True, nothing was scheduled.

However, there were efforts in several areas throughout the month:

  • Two new series were started: 1) DON’T TOUCH THE TRAINS and 2) SPIRITED. Both will be a blend of text, audio, and social posts and developed in a more organic methods compared to our scheduled series.
  • We had our first Funding Friday which was embedded in the BEHIND THE YELLOW LINE post on 19 January 2024. The post contained an original poem inspired while waiting for a train.
  • And, significant outreach was invested in developing film collaborators for the series and characters.

By the way, all of the above will be repeated and continued in the coming months.

But in this month, February, the next installment of The Messenger premieres. Titled ROMANCE 20 MINUTES INTO THE FUTURE, The Messenger comes out of retirement a second time and has a staff of two DPAs* – Fred and Frieda. They voiced the 21 January trailer which is reprised here:

Fred and Frieda, The Messenger’s staff, voiced this trailer

*DPAs is the abbreviation for digital personal assistants.

Enjoy February and please know The Three Fifty-seven remains committed to its core belief that “Stories are Everywhere”.

Sincerely,

William E. Spear, Jr.

THE MESSENGER – ROMANCE 20 MINUTES INTO THE FUTURE, Trailer

Written by William E. Spear

Produced by The Three Fifty-seven

21 January 2024

The trailer for The Messenger – Romance 20 Minutes into the Future stars Fred and Frieda who perform as digital personal assistants in the series

(Theme for ROMANCE 20 MINUTES INTO THE FUTURE comes up and goes under)

FRIEDA: Hello, this is Frieda . . .

FRED: . . . And I am Fred . . .

FRIEDA: And we are in-

FRED: -Nooo! We star.

FRIEDA: We appear.

FRED: Frieda! WE STAR!!!!

FRIEDA: Okay, we star in the new Messenger series titled ROMANCE 20 MINUTES INTO THE FUTURE. We are hired . . .

FRED: In airquotes by The Messenger’s agency. Frieda works for Jason Lines.

FRIEDA: And Fred works for Laura Flow. Both are executives at Global United Conglomerate.

FRED: Combined they don’t have the personality of a houseplant.

FRIEDA: FRED! They might be listening!

FRED: In that case, they are lovely people and valued colleagues.

FRIEDA: That’s better. They are struggling on a big project. That’s when we enter the scene.

FRED: With support from The Messenger.

FRIEDA: The story is written by, and with additional narration from, William Spear.

FRED: Music is by LESFM. Listen to The Three Fifty-seven’s . . .

FRED AND FRIEDA: . . . ROMANCE 20 MINUTES INTO THE FUTURE.

FRED: Wherever you get your podcasts.

(Theme for ROMANCE 20 MINUTES INTO THE FUTURE comes up and goes under)

WESJr

BEHIND THE YELLOW LINE

Written by William E. Spear

For The Three Fifty-seven

What would you do to come out from BEHIND THE YELLOW LINE?

Hello. This is The Three Fifty-seven and my name is William Spear.

Today’s story – BEHIND THE YELLOW LINE – was inspired while standing on a station platform in central New Jersey, USA.

Commuting is a large part of many people’s work routine. Waiting for the eastbound 6:05A is more an exercise in safety rather than gaining insight on one’s place in the universe.

But one railroad warning had a deeper meaning.

Before the philosophical moment, please note today’s post is part of Funding Friday. The third Friday of each is currently our only scheduled request for considering the different ways of supporting The Three Fifty-seven.

We may drop in other requests from time to time. And, probably put in a fixed link in the menu. But we are using the third Friday of each month, Funding Friday, as a means to regularly encourage financial support.

Consider all of this as literary busking: we entertaining you first and then asking for your support later.

Now that we’ve forewarned you with our intent, enjoy BEHIND THE YELLOW LINE.

BEHIND THE YELLOW LINE

Once upon a travel mine
From a station – train –
With joy, no disdain.

On the platform spending time
When writing was seen.
Insightful, not mean.

Safety, true, is always fine,
Were the words’ intent
And by human sent.

I stared in wondrous divine
Marveling simply.
Quiv’ring goose pimply.

“Stand behind the yellow line.”
I repeated the same
To imprint my brain.

“Stand behind the yellow line”
And prevent the train
From inflicting pain

Said me, myself, and mine.
“Who would dare risk it?
“Passenger train hit!”

Sage advice for staying fine.
Avoid the ocher.
Don’t get train broker.

As if on cue one roared by
And rattled me through
To my soul and shoes!

Although the warning heeded,
And the pain not met,
I soon made a bet.

A wager, big, was needed
To challenge the thought
That yellow lines sought

To alert only dangers.
But allowed to say,
Ev’ry single day

“Take a chance. A little chance.”
No, not with the train
That would not be sane.

Something small. Maybe a dance!
On a sidewalk street.
Nothing big. Petite.

Or maybe, drive a diff’rent
Way home. Take the right,
Not left, on this night.

Try with the belov’d pizza
A diff’rent topping.
There is no stopping

The marv’lous chances you’ll see.
Bigger or smaller?
Some even taller!

So, however way you choose,
Come out from BEHIND
THE dread YELLOW LINE.

The End.

You’ve just read BEHIND THE YELLOW LINE written by William Spear for The Three Fifty-seven..

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This presentation is part of Funding Friday to encourage readers and listeners to support the channel.

To that end, the image is a link to Buy The Three Fifty-seven a Cup of Coffee.

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However you choose to interact with The Three Fifty-seven, please know, in all its iterations, is written and produced by William Spear.

Thank you for joining.

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January 2024 – The Month Ahead and the 12 Before– The Business of The Three Fifty-seven

William E. Spear, Jr.

A regular accounting of The Three Fifty-seven published on the first Monday of each month.

The Month Ahead – Monday 1 January 2024

Hello, All,

Welcome to The Month Ahead for January 2024. It is my hope the upcoming year exceeds your expectations.

This issue is also a moment to look back on 2023 and publicly savor a few accomplishments.

Challenge Met

At the most elemental, The Three Fifty-seven challenged itself to blog, podcast, or both at least once a week for the year and that was accomplished. For further context, please note this production is a single narrator, fiction production. Refill my coffee cup for a toast!

As a byproduct, I am a better writer, narrator, and audio producer on 1 January 2024 than on 1 January 2023. Practice and repetition have value.

Select Highlights

Programming highlights included the following: 1) 22 episodes of IT SUITS HER; 2) Five episodes about poetry – yes, poetry – from the last 300 years; and 3) THE TABLE, an homage in honor of National POW/MIA Recognition Day.

The result is a year of work I’ll proudly claim.

But there were completely unexpected delights: a cross-promotion with the Madison On the Air podcast was ridiculous fun. And the inclusion of my narration of John Donne’s THE APPARITION (1633) in Micro podcast’s Late Great: Halloween Edition was a thrill.

Experiments

2024 is committed to a scheduled slate of programming plus experimenting with shows that organically combine social media and audio to develop characters and tell their stories. These shows, DON’T TOUCH THE TRAINS and SPIRITED, premiered in December and will progress for different lengths of time and at different paces.

Consider supporting The Three Fifty-seven’s operational expenses

Financial Support

The program is also taking steps toward seeking funding for its operational expenses such as its domain name and web presence.

Coffee – preferably black – is a constant companion. With that stated, a coffee cup seemed the best first symbol to request support.

The cup serves as a link to the home page of our Buy Me A Coffee campaign. Cheers and thanks for your consideration.

2024 Is Here

However, all of these begin with a season break in January. Nothing is scheduled but there are posts and episodes, including DON’T TOUCH THE TRAINS and SPIRITED, that will be released.

Enjoy the coming year and please know The Three Fifty-seven remains committed to its core belief that “Stories are Everywhere”.

Sincerely,

William E. Spear, Jr.

DON’T TOUCH THE TRAINS, First Contact

29 December 2023

In DON’T TOUCH THE TRAINS, Investigator JK Steffens has been contacted to research claims of paranormal activity at Maddison House. Steffens declines the case until . . .

From the Insight Studios of The Three Fifty-seven, this is a new feature about unexplained paranormal claims and reports here in Hunterdon County.

The first report is an investigation into a residential property in the central part of the county.

Initial details are below:

Start of report for 29 December

Investigating agency: not applicable
Lead Investigator: JK Steffens
Location: Maddison House at 1156 Hawke Town Road in Shadesburg, New Jersey
Initial contact: 29 December at 4:17A
Status of case: not applicable

Entry by Steffens:
29 December; 6:40A – Three voicemails received since 4:17A to investigate paranormal claims at a nearby residential property.

I am allowed to sleep.

Status update: Will contact during the day.

11:30A – At my office, received four more voicemails. Called after the last but no one answered.

11:35A – Tried again from the office but no answer. Why?

3:51P – At my office, received hourly voicemails since morning calls but no answers when I call back. Probably a prank.

Another call came in late in the afternoon and I answered it. Stupid move by me.

Caller asked me to investigate claims of paranormal activity at a modern residential property in Shalesburg.

Status update: Declined citing the lateness of the day, not having my full complement of gear, and a pending winter storm.

However, and due to the caller’s persistence and desperation, I agreed to meet at a nearby coffee shop.

I wrapped up my day job with a local insurance broker and drove through the first flurries to the meeting.

7:35P – At the coffee shop meeting with VF Wilkinson.

Wilkinson shared 60 years of voices and footsteps in and around the residence. Over a cup of coffee, Wilkinson described the voices as lively and energetic of all ages and conveying emotions from joy to sorrow.

The location and its voices still did not have anything to interest me on a cold and snowy Friday night.

Status update: Case declined

Wilkinson was disappointed but thanked me for my time.

As I was leaving, the property owner told me AB Dantley, another investigator, had been hospitalized earlier in the day and was in a coma. Further, a burnt baseball cap had been found on the property.

I know Dantley by reputation which is high. No one better.

The police had investigated but found nothing. If I was interested, a tour of the property could be arranged. I grudgingly accepted if for no other reason than to help Dantley.

Status update: Tour of location

8:55P – The owner walked me around the front and back yards of the property. The snow had stopped but is still four inches deep and made the tour slippery. Twice I fell and gouged the snow all the way to the grass. Another time I landed on my back and left an angel imprint trying to get up.

We went into the house and the property owner pointed out where the experiences occurred and where the burnt baseball cap was found. I still did not want the case and refused to explore further. The time is 10:27P.

Status update: Second decline

10:30P – Wilkinson asked to show me one more thing. We went outside and looked at the yard. I didn’t believe what I saw.

The four inches of snow that I had slipped on and left huge gashes was now free of any marks. No signs of where I tripped or left my angel. It was like I had not walked on the yard. Like I hadn’t even been there.

A child’s voice ran by me but didn’t leave any footprints.

Status update: Accepted the case and advised Wilkinson further actions were forthcoming. Left for home.

11:00P – I returned home and fell asleep.

11:43P – Woke to the sound of a child’s voice and footsteps running. I was the only one in the house.

There was also the faint sound of a freight train. Probably sounds out of the area carrying a longer than normal distance in the cold and snowy weather. Made a point to check in the morning.

11:56P – Final report for 29 December.

JKSteffens
Lead Investigator

The Insight Studios of The Three Fifty-seven will provide updates on the Maddison House investigation as received from JK Steffens.

Should anyone have any experiences with the Maddison House at 1156 Hawke Town Road in Shadesburg, New Jersey please reach out to Insight Studios.

Thank you for your attention.

WESJr